Pitch And Feedback

Last week Friday, we pitched our ideas and research to the teacher and other groups. The [ith went well and we received feedbacks from the groups and teacher. Majority of the feedbacks were positive with few suggestion on improvement. One insue that was most refered by the group was the odering of post on our blog. We have seen into the issue and re-orderd the posts so that it is easier to understand the developement of our research and proogrress of our work. Most people liked the way we potrayed our target audince, the use of test videos and diffenent variety in our presentation.
Below are the group feebacks from Friday on our pitch and blog. I intenteional edited them into scrap paper layouts just to give the blog that kind of "songwriting" feel to it.