Feedback On Rough Cut

The train sequence could start with him and girl then him on his own. X

Lots of 'aww-ing' so the video was effective. ✓

Lighting on train sequence isn't quite right, needs to be brighter. X

Hand on piano seat is abrupt and a quick cut. X

Syncing of guitar and hands are out in a few scenes. X

Guitar playing in the middle was like a 'filler' X

Needs to be more 'All killer no filler' X

Minor mistakes but on the whole good response. ✓

We will try and improve on all that we can from this feedback for our final cut. We will consider re-filming parts but with little time left we will see how the weather holds up as it's now the rainy season.